Yesterday after bible I went back to class when I got back to class miss percy told us to get changed into our togs because we had to go to the senior team swimming sports .
When everyone was ready we went when it was my turn to do my backstroke hugging the
board .
I went to Mrs Melick and the she told us to line up so we got into a line and then she told us to get into the water safely so we got inside safely and then she told us to rotate on to our backs and then she said ready set GO! I kick and kick my legs in the water that I was so tired but I kept on going while I was swimming on my back I heard a lot of children were cheering for me and then after that I was nearly gonna drown but then I got back up but when I got up my teacher gave me a trophy and it had the number 1st and I was so proud of myself.
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Hi, I really like your blog post it's really informative. I especially like the bit where you said you carried on going even though you were tired. Have you thought about rereading your work and checking that you used the correct tense all the way through? James
ReplyDeleteHi, I really like your blog post it's really informative. I especially like the bit where you said you carried on going even though you were tired. Have you thought about rereading your work and checking that you used the correct tense all the way through? James
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