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Hi Rosamund,I really like your blog post about your all about me I like how you added a lot of colour.Your red back ground suits the photos and the writing.but to improve can you please change the I's to a capitol letter thank you.
Hi lorileithank you for your thoughtful,helpful and positive comment and i will fix it up my i's right away.
Hi Rosamund,
ReplyDeleteI really like your blog post about your all about me I like how you added a lot of colour.Your red back ground suits the photos and the writing.but to improve can you please change the I's to a capitol letter thank you.
Hi lorilei
Deletethank you for your thoughtful,helpful and positive comment and i will fix it up my i's right away.