I really like your just a dog review post.My favourite part was when you were talking about how cory nearly got kidnapped.I also like how you went into detail.However when I was reading your review I noticed that when you were writing about your favourite part I was reading and reading and there were no full stops during and at the end of some of your paragraphs.So what you could do is go back and check if your punctuation is on point. Thank you.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your just a dog review post.My favourite part was when you were talking about how cory nearly got kidnapped.I also like how you went into detail.However when I was reading your review I noticed that when you were writing about your favourite part I was reading and reading and there were no full stops during and at the end of some of your paragraphs.So what you could do is go back and check if your punctuation is on point.
Thank you.